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Selfish Yet Broken Freedom by ~OnlyJustaMemory:iconOnlyJustaMemory:



I’m suffocating
I’m deprived
But it’s exhilarating
This feeling, So alive
  With each and every breath
  There’s less air
  And I'm closer to death
  Forgetting to care

I’m breaking
I’m alone
The hurt is aching
But the pain is never shown
  I’m about to shatter
  And closer with each blow
  I will never matter
  And You will never know

I’m bleeding out
I’m crying
I won’t shout
And I’m dying
  I’m about to fly
  With just one more
  Who cares if I die
  I’m found on the floor
:icononlyjustamemory:

Author's Comments

Yeah. I really like this one. PLZ tell me wut u think.

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:iconvideogamerkm:
It's great, has a really nice underlying rhythm to it :D

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Just remember!
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huh, what was it again?

~grow-the-fck-up *TheCanadianHerald

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:icononlyjustamemory:
Thanks! lol. I like it. I wrote it today.

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If you hold back feelings
because your afraid to get hurt,
you wind up gettign hurt anyway.
:iconvideogamerkm:
Nice ^~^ and yer welcome.

--
Just remember!
...
huh, what was it again?

~grow-the-fck-up *TheCanadianHerald

~ Video
:icononlyjustamemory:
lmao. thanks again.

--
If you hold back feelings
because your afraid to get hurt,
you wind up gettign hurt anyway.
:iconkororian:
Tis really good, your a really good poet lol.
:icononlyjustamemory:
lol. Thanks.

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If you hold back feelings
because your afraid to get hurt,
you wind up gettign hurt anyway.

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